I have already spoken to Jia Huan abt the preparation for the class presentation and if you do the work required as I have instructed , you should be more focused on the project theme.
Propaganda - need to be seen from two perspectives: Br and Jap
Also need to see examine different sources of propaganda from different periods with diff purpose: During attack and after Singapore under Jap Rule
So far what u have posted have not addressed these two areas clearly esp the ssecond one
What is Lacking:
1) How will you put together the documentary? What’s your PLAN for the film in terms of the CENTRAL THEME , the mESSAGE u want to convey to the viewers and HOW u are going to ensure that the message gets communicated clearly and convincingly?
If u had done the Protecting Seals documentary in class then maybe you should have learned something abt the director’s vision of what the message of the film is and HOW he is able to persuade the viewer to SEE his POINT of VIEW and FEEL the emotions he want them to feel.
2) How would u USE the research done so far? Actually I find that some research posted is irrelevant - it has NOTHING to do with topic so maybe as a group u need to discuss the central topic again and ask questions to clarify the concept of propaganda
3) Are u going to use PRIMARY sources as example like actual propaganda videos , posters etc and just explain hwo this were used and the message it was supposed to convey? Would this be too FACTUAL and BORING? How would you make the message and the interpretations become more interesting for the veiwers?
4) Have u considered producing your own PROPAGANDA from the JAP and BRitish point of view to show HOW this works in influencing the hearts and minds of people?
5) the inference and drawing conclusions from the various sources of propaganda is still missing - this is a very impt part of your research and u also need to question the bias and reliability of such sources to SHOW how one-sided point of view is communicated in propaganda, who they were targetted at , why they were used, how they worked etc.
6) I also don’t see individual post on reflections on learning so far, like based on trip, course, research done so far. This reflection is VERY IMPT - SHOW your THINKING and ability to use knowledge and skills from different subjects ( Eng Multiliteracies like visual literacy, photo journalism , video and storyboarding skills and use of language to tell a story, to explain, to persuade , to influence others point of view /emotions etc and History knowledge and SKILLS of inference, reliability etc)
Need to come up with a PLAN and schedule of work to be done with clear instructions and more discussion should be seen here at the blog!